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Andrea Bartz's avatar

Love this! Thanks so much for including We Were Never Here!!

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Shereen Cook's avatar

Great examples and lots to add to my TBR! Great first lines and first pages really make a difference. One of my favs is Naomi Novik’s Uprooted: “Our Dragon doesn’t eat the girls he takes, no matter what stories they tell outside our valley.” The whole first paragraph drags you in.

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Charlee Dyroff's avatar

Loved this—especially the reminder that even a slower start needs to sparkle. Do you think there’s more room for slow burns in literary fiction, or is everyone kind of expected to dive right in these days?

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Marina Brox's avatar

I enjoy books that build up a little before the catalyst arrives, and this gave me a few options for how to hook the reader without sacrificing that. Thanks for your work!

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Jennifer Keishin Armstrong's avatar

This is great. I love a strong lede, as we say in journalism. I also just today was saying that I wish the book I'm currently reading had a prologue. It's trotting through a lot of characters' backstories and details, and I know (hope?) they're going to collide in some catastrophic way, but I've found the first several chapters quite trying because I don't know for sure that we're getting somewhere.

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Caitlin Kunkel's avatar

This is SO HELPFUL, thank you! Love the examples you chose.

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Christopher Manson's avatar

THE PLOT and THE SEQUEL are amazing, and so is THE LAST ROOM ON THE LEFT.

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